...这是我刚写的作文,英语学渣伤不起〒_〒跪求各路大神帮助...
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发布时间：2024-10-23 23:26
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热心网友
时间：2024-11-02 14:37
还可以 给你简单 修改一下 语法错误
An incident that happened on my way to school has changed me a lot.
Yesterday morning, l hurried to the underground , but all of a sudden l remembered i frogot to take the Public Transportant Card with me and it was even worse that l had no money. That was very terrible. Later, a good girl swiped the card for me. I thanked her very much. However, she disappeared quickly. Because of her help, l was not late for school. I still remember her words,'It's doesn't matter. ' From this thing which is filled with kindess l know that love can be found everywhere. As senior high school students, we should try our best to make the world more beautiful.
热心网友
时间：2024-11-02 14:38
and 不是ang ...have no money ,it is terrible …错很多，基本上要全部重写
