一、建议信:外国朋友因文化差异被误解的建议
假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友Mike因为文化差异经常被同学误解,他感到非常苦恼,于是写邮件向你寻求帮助。请给他写一封回信,内容包括:1.给予安慰;2.提出建议;3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段给予安慰(要点1);第二段提出具体建议(要点2);第三段表达祝愿(要点3)。
【参考范文】 Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to learn that you are often misunderstood by your classmates because of cultural differences. As a matter of fact, it is not uncommon for many exchange students to find themselves in your situation. Just take it easy and here comes my advice.
It always comes first to learn the Chinese language and culture, and master some common vocabulary and expressions, in order to avoid unnecessary misunderstandings in
communication. Understanding Chinese customs is also preferable. After all, culture differs from country to country. Finally, why not make friends with some peers and adapt to the life here as soon as possible?
I hope my advice is of some help to you and that you can rid yourself of the trouble soon. (122 words)
Yours, Li Hua
【中文翻译】 亲爱的麦克:
听说你因为文化差异经常被同学误解而感到非常苦恼。事实上,像你这样的情况对于很多交换生来说是很常见的。放轻松点,让我给你一些建议。
首先要学习中国的语言和文化,掌握一些常用词汇和用语,以避免在沟通交流中不必要的误解。其次,了解中国的风俗习惯,毕竟,每个国家的都存在各自的文化差异。最后,你可以结交一些同龄人,尽快适应这里的生活。
希望我的建议对你有所帮助。祝你早日摆脱困扰。 李华
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤:
(1)审题判定文体为建议信;
(2)因两人是朋友关系,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为建议的具体内容,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。 2.本文的亮点:
(1)it is not uncommon for sb to do sth运用双重否定句表达肯定意义; (2)take it easy别紧张;
(3)here comes ...运用完全倒装结构;
(4)It always comes first总是排在第一位的;
(5)It is also preferable to do sth做某事也是可取的; (6)differ from country to country因国家而异; (7)be of some help to对某人有所帮助; (8)rid oneself of使某人摆脱...。
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二、回复信:分享校园特色活动
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Chris来信询问你校的校园特色活动。请你用英文写一封回信,内容包括:1.询问近况;2.介绍活动;3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段询问近况(要点1);第二段写活动内容(要点2);第三段表达祝愿(要点3)。
【参考范文】 Dear Chris,
How is everything going? You wrote to inquire about my school's featured activities, so I’ll introduce some to you.
My school has a great variety of distinctive activities, ranging from traditional Chinese culture to physical exercise. Every March will witness a textbook play performance, where students perform Chinese classic plays in English, sharing Chinese stories to make China voice better heard. Equally attractive is Tai chi training, which focuses on the perfect combination of wisdom and strength, and spreads traditional Chinese classical culture.
Can you get me informed of some special activities in your school? Best wishes! (97 words)
Yours, Li Hua
【中文翻译】 亲爱的克里斯:
一切安好?你来信询问我校的校园特色活动,那就让我给你介绍一下。
我的学校有很多特色鲜明的活动,有弘扬中国传统文化的,有锻炼学生体质的,不一而足。每年3月份,学校都会举办课本剧表演,让同学们用英语表演中国的经典剧目,用英语讲好中国故事。还有一点很吸引人的是开展注重于智慧与力量的完美融合的太极拳培训,传播中国经典传统文化。
你能和我说说你们学校的特色活动吗?祝好! 李华
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤:
(1)审题判定文体为回复信;
(2)因两人是朋友关系,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为分享校园特色活动,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。 2.本文的亮点:
(1)a great variety of各种各样的;
(2)ranging from ... to ...说明种类多样; (3)witness见证,目睹,运用无灵主语结构;
(4)sharing Chinese stories to make China voice better heard讲好中国故事; (5)Equally attractive is运用完全倒装结构; (6)get sb informed of sth使某人知道某事。
三、通知:创意环保展
假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华,学校打算举办一场环保展(exhibition),展出同学们利用废旧材料制作的手工艺品(handicraft)。请你写一则通知,发布在校英文网站上,内容包括:1.展出时间和地点;2.鼓励学生自制展品;3.提交展品的方式和截止日期。
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注意:写作词数应为80左右。 写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:一段论。介绍展出的时间和地点(要点1),并鼓励学生自制展品(要点2),说明提交展品的方式和截止时间(要点3)。
【参考范文】 Notice
In order to inspire your creative spirit and enhance your awareness of environmental protection, our school is scheduled to hold an exhibition in the first week of next month from 3 PM to 5 PM in the exhibition hall on the first floor of the Art Building. You can use your imagination to make handicrafts from waste materials, presenting an exhibition with a mix of art and environmental protection. Your works should be submitted to the Student Union office before 4 PM on May 31. Your active participation is highly expected, and please keep those around you informed. (98 words)
The Student Union 【中文翻译】 通知
为了激发同学们的创新精神,提升同学们的环保意识,我们学校打算在下个月第一周下午3点至5点在校艺术楼一楼展厅举办一场环保展。同学们可以发挥想象力,利用废旧材料制作手工艺品,呈现一场集艺术和环保于一体的展览。大家的作品请于5月31日下午四点前交至学生会办公室。非常期待同学们的踊跃参与,并请相互转告。
学生会
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤: (1)审题判定文体为通知;
(2)因本文是一则通知,故李华身份不必交代; (3)因文本主体部分写展览的具体信息(目的、时间、地点、展品内容和提交方式与时间等),故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点:
(1)enhance one's awareness of提升某人的...意识; (2)be scheduled to计划做某事;
(3)..., presenting ...分词短语作状语,意为“呈现...”; (4)with a mix of ... and ...集...和...于一体; (5)is highly expected非常期待; (6)keep sb informed使某人知道。
四、祝贺信:球队获得校际篮球赛冠军
假定你是李华,收到外国朋友Chris的邮件,告诉你他所在的球队上周在校际篮球赛(interschool basketball game)中获得冠军。请给他回一封邮件,祝贺他取得的好成绩,并赞赏他付出的努力。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。 写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般过去时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段开门见山表示祝贺;第二段回顾Chris为备赛付出的努力;第三段期待Chris取得更好的成绩。
【参考范文】 Dear Chris,
Congratulations to your team on winning the championship in the interschool
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basketball game last week, which came as no surprise.
The past year witnessed your team studying the opponent teams through game videos to get to know each other, so that you would defeat them all. In the meanwhile, you also improved yourselves technically and tactically by training around the clock. As it turns out, practice makes perfect, and your hard work has finally paid off.
Congratulations again. Looking forward to your better results in the future! (87 words)
Yours, Li Hua
【中文翻译】 亲爱的克里斯:
祝贺你的球队在上周校际篮球赛中获得冠军,这是意料之中的事。
为了获得冠军,在过去的一年里你和你的球队不断通过比赛视频研究各个球队,做到知己知彼。同时,你们也通过日以继夜地训练提升队伍的战术水平和队员们的篮球技能。熟能生巧,你们的努力训练最终得到了回报。
期待你在未来取得更好的成绩! 李华
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤:
(1)审题判定文体为祝贺信;
(2)因两人是朋友关系,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为说明Chris成功的付出与努力,故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。 2.本文的亮点:
(1)... came as no surprise毫不奇怪; (2)witness运用了无灵主语结构; (3)In the meanwhile与此同时; (4)around the clock夜以继日地; (5)pay off得到回报。
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